Friday, 27 June 2014

About A Girl (2002) Brian Percival - Thomas Herd


The director has represented the girl and her family in their status and the girl's age.

In the first section there are two medium close ups and one close up shot of her walking through three different settings, the editor has used jump cutting so you see all three settings within 7 seconds. This suggests that a teenager's life is very hectic and there are lots of things going on in her life. You can also tell this because of the hand held camera suggesting that nothing is simple and smooth in her life.










Also, in this section, the director has given the audience an idea of what her status could be. An aspect that highlights her status is the setting - the locations where she is walking. This includes graffiti on the walls and the tower block in the background which suggests she is from an under class. These opening shots additionally show her costume which is very functional; you can tell this because of her cheap puffer coat. However, as she is a teenager, she likes to dress up where she can. Percival has shown this with her large loopy earrings. The may be to show her dreams and aspirations and what she might to dress like if she lived her dream. This is of course to show the audience that he dreams are completely unrealistic because of her status.

In another scene where the girl is talking to her father. Due to the dialogue we can tell that he isn't really interested in what she is saying and we can also tell from the situation that her parents are separated as she doesn't see him often. This is asking the audience to whether to judge her situation or to feel sorry for her in the upcoming scenes.

Thursday, 19 June 2014

Self Evaluation - Thomas Herd

One of our weaknesses in both our Thriller and Prelim film was the range of shots we used in a single edit, if we had made more shots of a certain scene then it would have made it more interesting for the audience.

We found this was an issue when we had completed our filming for our Prelim. The shots were far too long and I don't think we took enough risks within the range of angles as they were very basic.

During our film, I thought we improved our range however there was a specific shot at the end of the opening where older antagonist was walking through the Gatwick Hangar. We only shot this from one angle which was an extreme long shot with a pan from left to right. We tried to break up the edit by using other footage but it didn't have the effect we wanted to get across to the audience.

The reason why we only made one shot of this was because initially we didn't know we could film in that area. This means if we had done some more research into the location we could have planned better for the situation. this would have meant that we could have used a variety of angles for this shot for example close ups, over the shoulder shots and also, the extreme long shot that we initially used.

Self Critique -(Nice Word Critique, Isnt It ??) Harry Quilley

So, after watching our thriller opening as well as our prelim, going through it to find our weaknesses/problems that would make our work better and more complete.

I decided to choose recording and editing sound with images appropriately.

One thing that I realised through both our thriller opening as well as our prelim, was predominantly our shooting material. Even though we got some terrific shots in both our pool and airport scene(and in the hub), I believe that just a little extra time and work in either of these locations would have bumped our film up a mark or 2, but how you ask ??
Well it was clear from the start that the footage we got from our second trip to Gatwick wasn't up to scratch. Partly due to lack of time and experience we only shot certain scenes and clips once or twice which looking back on didn't help when coming to edit together with match on actions. As well as this, their was a few great shots that we had, but were to long and tedious to have as one clip so we had to cut it  shorter than we would've like.

Now then, what could we have done to improve.
First things quite obvious looking back at it, we were even told it over and over before shooting, but once your their you don't start to think of shooting a clip 3,4 or even 5 times. Come our short film, I will make sure every scene and clip is short at least 4 times to allow for maneuverability in editing to get the timing just right. This gives the final edit to be just right with no mistakes.

Another way in which we can enhance the quality in our film shooting, is the angles we take the shot from, e.g. (insert clip of dad walking across the hanger).
In this scene we have a nice wide detailed setting, which  we didn't use to our utmost capability. Although time was problem again, if we could have set up the camera in 3 or 4 locations and shot it 8-10 times, it would have made for a much more thrilling scene instead of a chopped up dry scene.

There is also one final bit I would add to this list of improvement. Our use of foleys was basically non existent, although this time we got lucky and most of our camera sound was useful and that we had music or a voice-over for the whole opening meant it wasn't to hard to cover anything that wasn't perfect in the sound department. Taking our time to research and experiment with sounds will be necessary in or short film as sounds have to be much clearer as well as having speech within our film. By doing this we can cut the sound entirely and use foleys and separate voice recordings to make the film crisp and clear. Adios.


Monday, 16 June 2014

Evaluating your own Foundation Portfolio Thriller Opening - Thomas Herd


Shooting material appropriate to the task set;

Our film fitted with in genre of thriller due to many aspects. At times it felt like a trailer as there was lots of action at times.

Controlled use of the camera

We mostly used a tripod when filming so a lot of our shots were controlled and steady. We also had to do the scene in the swimming pool; therefore we couldn’t use a tripod. The use of handheld cameras helped create a sense a frantic situation.

Occasionally we used a shoulder camera holder which made it easier for us to get the shots we wanted to use. These shots were definitely 'less controlled' however it add more variety to our shots.

Attention to framing

Generally, I thought we kept the character in the shot, where we wanted them. An example of this was when we had a couple of close ups on a character on the phone. The top of his head to his chin was in the shot making it a complete shot. Additionally, when we were filming in the pool with handheld cameras we kept the character in the pool in shot at all times.

On one shot, during a part when a character was getting out of his seat, the top of his head went out of the frame. We could have stopped this if we had planned this specific shot better. Also, in the opening shot, the plane starts on the left hand side of the screen and moves into the middle for the rest of the shot. Had I taken more time; it would have been ideal that the plane started in the middle.

Variety of shot sizes

We used a number of close ups, mediums and a few long shots in our work. The establishing shots worked to show the audience clearly where the action was taking place. Towards the end of the film when one character walks through the airport hangar, we could have shown that from a range of angles to make it more interesting.

Close attention to mise en scene

Getting access to Gatwick Airport and the swimming pool was vital in deciding the plot and settings for our film. This help move the plot on for the audience.

When filming in the plane, we tried to make it look like a private plane; however there was obviously difficulty due to it being a normal public plane. We could have also more time to consider our costumes for the characters.

Editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer

We felt we made the character coming off the plane (antagonist) was made very clear due to his presence and the shots we created. The character in the street wasn’t easily linked to the two other antagonists within the film. So the audience couldn’t place his character in the storyline.

Making selective and appropriate use of shot transitions, captions and other effects

The fade to black at the end of the opening emphases his death and what might be ahead. Also, at the start we tried to incorporate the blue of our title sequence into the blue sky which is a graphic. We could have taken more time over uses captions, maybe using them for the locations with the establishing shots for the three settings.

Recording and editing sound with images appropriately

The splashing in the swimming pool created the effect of the desperate situation which we could then alter the volume to make it more effective. To improve our work we could have used extra foleys for example; splashes in the water and the plane taking off.