Good effort lads a good selection of shots well lit that meet the criteria set by the task. Very well framed especially at the start on the stairs, some good parallel editing that helps add some pace and intrigue into the task, it raises questions, which is what a thriller should do. Harry is very well lit and its good to see that you have White balanced as you have gone through this is a common error. In order to improve I would recommend perhaps a tracking shot at the start. Good effort
Good effort lads a good selection of shots well lit that meet the criteria set by the task. Very well framed especially at the start on the stairs, some good parallel editing that helps add some pace and intrigue into the task, it raises questions, which is what a thriller should do. Harry is very well lit and its good to see that you have White balanced as you have gone through this is a common error. In order to improve I would recommend perhaps a tracking shot at the start. Good effort
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